Excellent.
Great, love your work.
Since you like comparing yourself so much with paragon =P.. i'm going to say that this is as good, if not better then paragon's work..love it.
I really love how the bass has that little drop-off every now and then, makes a nice change.
I'm a big fan of drums and trance..you had an excellent mixture in there with that saw..-drools slightly- =P better clean that up.
So you get my 5 plus a download, good work and keep it up ^^.